Do you like my poem.........?

I tried to figure this one out, but I can't really see where you were going with this. This isn't about a guy who gets off work and has with a prostitute is it? I guess in a way I can see how this guy still ends up depressed throughout to the end. Looking back, I think I do like it in a weird way. Hmmm, I'll have to think this one over a bit. Good effort though, because I think you might have something here.